Thursday, 30 September 2010

Bonsai Beast


Some men have penises that can chop down trees,
But some women prefer penises that buzz like bees..

4 comments:

  1. Some Men, Some Women

    Some men have penises that can chop down trees,
    But some women have penises that buzz like bees..

    (some poets just write their poems and do not change them afterwards, the others change them to hide their very first and genuine meaning?)

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  2. I actually agree that the first version was somewhat ambiguous :) Sexuality is only an easy subject in literature if the author is at ease with it. Best wishes for 2013.

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  3. I think I'm at ease with it. I occasionally do rewrite, change, revise and edit. Bear with me. May I also wish you a happy new year!

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