Wednesday, 9 June 2010

Not Ships Exactly


We were dodgems that crashed in the night,
And while were seeing stars,
We also span stars.
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousMonday, 22 April, 2013

    What is the meaning of this poem?

    A Girl With No Name ;)

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  2. Suki SpanglesThursday, 25 April, 2013

    Girl With No Name,
    Ship's - as in ships that pass in the night.
    Dodgems - not so much ships, but where two souls crash/bang into one another.
    Seeing stars - concussion;
    span stars - romance/lurve.
    That's it.

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  3. AnonymousSaturday, 27 April, 2013

    Thank you, Suki :)

    I remember you amended this one.

    Best wishes.

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